MARV, i've seen u do alot better my nukka, but it's str8 i guess. limited, i've never seen u, but i thought ur shit was pretty funny, which is what i try to incorporate into my steeze. people laughin =
i was lovin limit's shit like -
"No...I ain' a vet...but already have taken the entire net
I will win, wanna bet? No mystery when you don't have 3 wins yet"
^funny
but nothing else besides fluidity and structure.
MARV's ish was -
"limited edition? we all dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck //
make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //"
i think the other punches shoulda been set up better, that the only thing u need to work on dog, other than that, ur game's pretty tight.
i really do'nt know who to give it to, i love ppl who can keep it fun in their words, but marv's shit was pretty slick. oh fuck it, MARV gets the win, next time limited, fill up the bars, i would of voted for u if there was more to read.
VOTE-MARV