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Old 04-29-04, 03:01 AM   #48
Triple_N
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This was a good battle here's the break down for black
Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle
have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow"

Bad opener

tha only way ya shit could be hot is if u read mine
I spit like Armor-all....all my lyrics got shine
destroy ya self esteem...ya shyt aint makin connections
ya shyt bout as hard as a dick wit no erection

These are best lines, an they were just ok not great
The rest was weak an closer was horrible

Shadow

It's just plain fucking sad, check this cats age (19)
And still couldn't get a job for minimum wage

Weak opener

Cat got two quarters to his name and think he 50 Cent
Quit chasing fame... spit one bar n your talent spent

Good punch

Battl'n herbs is something I don't do generally..
But just for now I'll play Ulysess S. n General Lee

Nice worplay(alot of people aren't going to catch that though)

Cat call himself Black Thief, though really meant he Lack Bief (beef)
You sickness just a false belief, but when you die it's still a fucking relief

You fucked up the set up line, it threw the whole punch off

The way he got a nine milliy willy.. good grief!
Think he hot smoking a floral leaf, I leave him sleeping on a coral reef

Ok closer not great but good enuff

Overall this was a fairly close battle both could have came alot harder, black had a few decent punches, but I gave it to shadow becuz he had a few good punches, but he won wit his wordplay an multies, good drop y'all stay up, one!
Vote: Shadow
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