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Old 04-29-04, 04:23 AM   #40
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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damm u niggaz aint goin da sleep till dis battle is closed lol aight umm battelw as okay could of been betta without all da bitchin and shit

opener-after...i dont know if u bit it
structure-j...after ya shit was type sloppy dunn
punchlines-after..hands down j i aint really see nun dunn
wordplay-umm j tried so i'll give dat 2 him
personals-a tie both of u ahd like wun or 2
creativity-after
enjoyed-...i gotta with after man...j u had a minute da come up with some shit but u didn't nahmean u probly get madd dat i aint vote 4 u but hey im only bein honest...after took dis shit

my vote-after.....and yo vote on wun of my fukkin battles yo after i voted on like 3 of ya shits dogg give a honest 2 mine...j u 2 dunn they links is in my sig
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT