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Old 04-29-04, 08:05 AM   #9
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Here we go....

CJ came with a good flow and punches were OK.......... could have used more wordplay. That is what his whole verse lacked.......wordplay and metaphors. He did come with punches though.......JOAT had a very uneven flow..... stretched lines in some places and short lines in others......made it hard to read it in any kind of rythem. He didn't really have any punches either.....personals were near invisible and wordplay wasn't evident. I have heard a lot about him bein good but it didn't show in this battle...........my fav line was....

Another wanna-b g, come back at me, talkin about what your gun do,/
Puttin' through a lyrical tannin' bed, findin' different ways to Son you./

Vote - CounTREE Jay
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