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jay-dogg....verse had ok flow, a few punches, lack of creativity is a downer in ure verse but not bad....

kostie.....ure flow just lacked.....n lacked........i cant really say much good but i can tell u what u need to do to elevate....
Work on ure flow structure, try endin a line wit / or - , this way people will get the jist of what ure sayin n how ure flow is...
be more creative, try different words, try making up a few punchlines that r about ure opponent thus calling them 'personals' and with work n elevation you will be coming up with better battle verses. also wok on vocab, now alotta people hit the dictionary wen told this but just listen to some of the better worded rappers (nas,wu-tang,cannibus etc) and you'll pick it up.....

aiight ma vote goes to jay dogg simpley because he had punches and a better overall verse than kostie.....

holla an vote ma battles......FAIRLY....

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