Heres Deleons break down.............
I lead tha pack even if their aint no one to follow--
I spit more shit than a belimic bitch afraid to swallow--
(Pretty good opener i give it a 7/10)
rookies step up to tha plate but they seem 2 forget they bats--
think they can battle DeLeon? these niggas forget they facts--
(Ok rhyme scheme nothing to amazing i give it a 5/10)
i clap more than than the oscars after an emmy winnin performance--
and pack more heat than a volcano but my flows never go dormant--
(This line i liked jus cuz it was some good use of words u get a 6/10)
fuck your dumb shit, i dont like how these soft rooks is actin--
(very very bad man nothin rhymes with this actin and napkin dont rhyme....1/10)
talkin back to they daddy, if they moms wasnt at the party they'd just be jizz stains
on a napkin--
(same shyt here ur losin points step up and dont jump off ur rhyme scheme iight 1/10)
chew up phony lines and spit em back out like a champ--
specially when i can turn off these phony mc's light like a lamp--
(this was 1 of my favorites could use of words pretty hot shyt 8/10)
your simple, simplistic rhymes aint shit--
(damn man no no no stop with the random lines decent words so it gets a 3/10)
so drop tha keyboard you better off ridin dick--
(another random 1 and a bad 1 at that sop guess what it gets exactly that a 1/10)
so lemme give ya advice and in ya mind's where it sticks--
you a featherweight nigga tryin to deal with tha bricks--
(not bad at all u should use more of this stuff instead of random lines 6/10)
you just dont know, my gats got more *pop* than justin timberlake--
askin how much glory i want? well how much should a winner take?--
(DAMN!!!! hott finisher u started and ended this shyt strong good shyt dawg 8/10)
46/100 thoose random lines hurt you pretty bad.........
Ok now swampsoldier707s break down......
ill snatch you like a batch of cookies/
im a lyrical vet you just another one of them rookies/
(not a bad start i give it a 6/10)
my rhymes they come clean and fresh/
im a motha fuckin beast ill chew you up and spit yo flesh/
(keepin up with the rhymes good idea this is another 6/10)
you know the fact of dis matter is/
my substance is highly hazardous/
i can bust any time cuz im hideous off the canibus/
(3 line hit nice usually pretty hard but u pulled it off well so ima give it a 8-10)
this shit aint over well not yet till the day that im stoppin im droppin/
bombs on dis foo named deleon and im lockin my fist real tight left and right and fuck them raps you be rockin/
(a little dragged but still pretty good 5/10)
now deleon on my bad side you listed/
i got killah rhymes to let you know im sick and twisted/
(You on your game kid keep it comin 7-10)
im flossin and bossin and i will always be respected/
deleon you an mc who will always be rejected/
(this is a good spit no random lines and a good mix of rhymes 6-10)
so if you wanna see me come to v-town south/
dont even write back dawg just shut yo mouth/
(good finisher not to strong but pretty good 5/10)
43/70
Punches
eleon
Flow:Swampsoldier
Opener/Finisher
eleon
Personals:Swampsoldier
Vocab:Swampsoldier
Good Battle.....Vote:Swampsoldier