BREAKDOWN

Originally posted by Enygma

This cat Came in Insultin, though his Game Is Revoltin//
His rhymes are full of shit.....even his Name Is In Colons//
not that good of a personal didnt make much sense.2/10
Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
Nice personal worked his location well.8/10
I'm Spittin Logic, while he just can't cope, This Kid's Retarded//
I gotta boot him in the head........just to Kick Some Knowledge//
Not that good could of been worded better. 2/10
I spit like Forty Five's......got you meetin Your Demise//
And feedin off my shit......just like a Swarm Of Flies//
Played spittin concept, decent second line. 4/10
Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//
better this was decent but could of been better.6/10

22/50 decnt but could of made punches better worded and more content.

Origanaly posted by :Krysis:

see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--
Nice personal worked his name in a meta quite well. 7/10
dont get pissed-wit-me cuz ma shit comes out more 'crisperly'-
you couldnt be 'tight' if u was a 'chinese nun' an still not lost ya 'virginity'--
Good crisperly and chinese worked this well. 5/10
so ure enygmatic? u couldnt 'spray' if u was an 'automatic' u 'suck' like a 'vac-matic'-
this was kinda weak.2/10
u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets-
Good could of been worded better but still good.5/10
see u must have a fascination with assasination cuz for chattin shit i'ma end ya whole life creation-
stretched to much didnt need that internal. 3/10
then i'll 'wrap'(rap) this shit up like mummyfication, leavin yo ass on perminant vacation--
Pretty good 6/10
you could mettamorphasize, shit u gone wish u was a cat cuz defeatin me gone take u at least 9 lives--
not that strong. 3/10
now theres a loss of weight cuz i just smashed another heavyweight-
aint no debate, when u stepped up to the plate u concealed ure own fate--
you just got lyrikally raped.....
Nice pretty good. 6/10
see battlin me is like fightin a heavy mobb, best keep ya day job cuz u'll get robbed--
now look at the situation, you just got cut down like dead plantation
ok not that hard hitting. 4/10

41/90 - win by more content but try not to stretch lines too much.


This battle wnt to kryo only because of more content and slightly better attributes although structure and flow for some parts were fuked.

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