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Old 04-29-04, 12:30 PM   #31
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Wow! This is the biggest display of free postin that i have ever seen.......lol

Wow! Another lyrical killer! - Just like the 2000 others,
... Fake and laughable, kinda like Warner Brothers ...
Good opener.....no need for a link, lol!
Posted your pics up and now you're being a tough talker,
In reality, the only person you've popped is Betty Crocker!
I liked it but it didn't seem worded right....should have used Orville Reddenbacker
Sure you've elevated from the start, and that's alright,
But your success is fading quicker than Vanna White's.
I didn't like the punch.....I get it, but it wasn't that good...
... Money talks, and you're living proof talk's cheap ....
I'm no vet, but I'll lay you and your dawgs down to sleep.
Good meta......
It's hard to see when you're in the eye of the storm,
But why should I take your crew seriously...
When you don't even have your own forum?
Okay people....this is a couplet, worded quite well I might add...


Come On Karl Everyone Knows You Pussy So Im Treatin This Batlle Like Date Rape/
Stab Merks Wit Tru Faith,An Make Yo Own Words Hurt U Like Havin A Toothache/
Nice punch but it got swallowed by the stretched lines...
Hes Just In The Company Of "Royal" Illness Like "Stayin With Lords"/
i Will Put karls "Life On The Line" Quick Like Hes "Playin With Cords"/
Tried to hard for the metas and never really landed a punch.....flowed better though
Comes In,Shows No Skills At All Like Retard Pieces In Art-Shows/
Heartless Flows Get You Hurt Quick Like Matadors In Red Clothes/
Ehhh....not that well worded...
Face It U Aint Hot,Just Half Baked Like Dave Chapelle/
Let Yo Carcass Rot, Burnt An Shot In The Back Of A Chevelle/
No real punch there....
Now Karl Malone Is Ready To Fall Again Like He Missed A Step/
Throw My Pics In Your Face So You Can Really Picture-Death/
Not a good closer......


Overall this wsa an ok battle at first glance......Karl came with a good flow and some witty punches. Nothing really stood out and made you say Ohh Shit, though. Had a few rough spots but an overall good verse.......E Looch started with a very stretched bar as his opener and it took away from the whole flow of the verse. I even overlooked the punch the first time cause it didn't flow right. You had a lot of metas and wordplay but sometimes you forgot the punch. I like how you vote but i didn't like how you spit in this one. I'm sure you can do better.........

Vote - Karl Merks
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