Flyweight
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IP:
killuminatic -
"U got a brain for this rap game then riddle me this
How u gon battle the God that should've aborted ya cripple fetus"
not the best opener, but it kinda connected. 7/10
"Cripple cuz he cant run spots, when guns cock,
He gets scared and what not, soon as they buck, pop,
His tires gone, Already waist high so to live he suck cock"
I din't like this, you rhymed an odd number of lines, and used cock twice.
favourite line -
"Shit thats something i got to see, Something i'd walk to see
Something u know u cant do, dont try to walk with me,
Missin half your being like a topless tease,
Like a veggie salad topped with beef"
flow - it flowed smoothly, easy enough to read through fluently.
punches - punches weren't really very personal, but some digs where in there.
Multi's - some nice multi's where seen at key points.
ghetto cripple -
"no teeth thats how you like it, midgets or smaller///
you like to fuck virgins so you get down with toddlers///"
wasn't feelin' that line.
"im'a pitbull off his leash//"
isn't that Eminem??
Flow - the flow, i thought was pretty good, well done
punches - a couple of sweet punches
multi's - couldn't see much use of multi's in this verse
vote - killuminatic
good battle, both of you, peace...
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