Very nice. I'm glad it was short I'm not in the mood to read an enourmass post right now.

The message was very clear, and the chorus flowed very nicely.

The flow in the verses was kind of choppy, but for a text drop it doesn't matter as much.

Overall its a pretty nice verse, although you could have used some multis to help the flow

And if you could please leave feed on a keystyle called "Adrenaline In My Head"

Peace

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