ANOTHER ONE OF THESE WACK RAPPERS HAVE BOTHERED ME AGAIN/
LOOKS LIKE THIS BLACK THIEF BOUT TO GET ROBBED OF A WIN/
first line whack, second line ok
U A THIEF IT AINT KNO SUCH THING AS HALF WAY CROOKS/
U KNO U PREWROTE AND IM THE AUTHOR OF YA RHYME BOOK/
that first line had nothing to do with the second.. ok punch
TO BEAT THIS LIL NIGGA ITS EFFORTLESS/
NOBODY UNDERSTANDS YA RHYMES THEY LOOK LIKE THIS/
bleh.. his rhymes make perfect sense
U CAN BEAT WHOEVER U WANT U WONT GAIN RECOGNITION/
IF U CANT STAND MY HEAT GET OUT OF HELL, FUCK A KITCHEN/
ok.. not overly creative
IM AS LOW AS YA BALLS, HAH THATS PRETTY GOOD PLACE KID/
YA GIRLS TOLD ME YA SHITS WAS THIS BIG----------->()/
feed of his verse.. and then not flip it.. weak.
U CALL YA SELF A THIEF U GOTS TO BE LYIN/
AFTER I GIVE U UR ASS WHOOPIN, HOP OFF THIS SITE AND GET AN ALIAS/
alias and lying dont come close to rhyming
ITS OVER DAWG I CAN LEAVE U WIT THAT/
NEXT TIME U BATTLE I HOPE U ELEVATE YA LEVEL FROM GARBAGE TO WACK
ok punch, coudl have worded it better..

I cripple ya lines...ya structure is weak
I compare ya skills to that of a Memphis Bleek
meh.. not great
A lotta talk a lotta swagger...but fail to make hits....
u bout as appealin as a bitch wit no ass and no tits
original i guess.. not that hard of a punch
u fail to make tha cut....ya skills is pathetic
even ya flow is whack...ya name is prosthetic
ok.. could have had a better personal there i think
u rank up high wit tha best of fools....
but on Rb you below me....right under my testicles...
nice, nice
I bust caps...I spit bars....my shit never got a glitch
You fuck raps....U shit bars....you aint nuthin but a bitch
ok.. i think the style is constricting your punches here...
Are u really a rapper?I just cant believe it
Ya chances of winnin?similar to that of a bulemic..
kinda played... but still pretty nice

alright black, i think you forced this new style on some of your lines and i just wasnt feeling it, but you still had some nice punches in there.

gotass.. you bit lines, tried feeding of his verse, had a fucked up personal... you gotta elevate.

v/ black.

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