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Old 04-29-04, 02:05 PM   #28
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enygma:

"This cat Came in Insultin, though his Game Is Revoltin//
His rhymes are full of shit.....even his Name Is In Colons//
^^ill punch nice flow to it and personals hit hard 7/10
Lettin Two Spray, another loss...what would your Crew Say?//
Leave your head so full of 'Notts' people are askin.....'U.K?'//
^^another ill punch ..good wordplay and multies 8/10
I'm Spittin Logic, while he just can't cope, This Kid's Retarded//
I gotta boot him in the head........just to Kick Some Knowledge//
^^decent punch could have been better 6/10
I spit like Forty Five's......got you meetin Your Demise//
And feedin off my shit......just like a Swarm Of Flies//
^^wasnt feelin this one that much but it flowed good 6/10
Hit you like Infantry Regiments when you're Seekin Out Veterans//
RB indicted you for wackness... I'm just Leakin The Evidence//
^^good closer should have came harder 6/10

overall:33/50 good verse

:krysis:

"see ya name is straight by definition cuz how u wins a 'Mystery'-
see u could b micheal jackson but still not re-write 'History'--
^^ok opener could have been better 5/10
dont get pissed-wit-me cuz ma shit comes out more 'crisperly'-
you couldnt be 'tight' if u was a 'chinese nun' an still not lost ya 'virginity'--
^^is crisperly a word lol anyways ok not hard punch tho 4/10
so ure enygmatic? u couldnt 'spray' if u was an 'automatic' u 'suck' like a 'vac-matic'-
^^not good at all 1/10
u couldnt 'pack-shit' if i stuffed 'faeces' in ure pockets-
n u couldnt blow me up if u started spittin rockets-
^^probably your best nice shyt 7/10
see u must have a fascination with assasination cuz for chattin shit i'ma end ya whole life creation-
^^didnt flow to well ok punch 4/10
then i'll 'wrap'(rap) this shit up like mummyfication, leavin yo ass on perminant vacation--
^^another bar didnt flow too good but better than last line 5/10
you could mettamorphasize, shit u gone wish u was a cat cuz defeatin me gone take u at least 9 lives--
^^ mettamorphasize..is it a word? anyways nice bar lil stretched 4/10
now theres a loss of weight cuz i just smashed another heavyweight-
aint no debate, when u stepped up to the plate u concealed ure own fate--
you just got lyrikally raped.....
^^another stretched bar ok punch good flow 5/10
see battlin me is like fightin a heavy mobb, best keep ya day job cuz u'll get robbed--
now look at the situation, you just got cut down like dead plantation
^^not a good closer not a hard punch 4/10

overall: 39/90..expected you to come harder nice battle

vote: enygma his verse was better overall nice structure flow and punches/personals

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