Alright, check it. Cripple, your verse sucked hard ass. The flow was terrible, the structure was terrible, the punches sucked hard, it was generic as fuck. All those punches might have been half decent if they weren't played as fuck... use set up lines and wordplay to make it creative. Also work some personals in there... otherwise you could have prewritten this shit a year ago...

kill.. you gotta work on getting rid of filler.. and using set up lines to make your punches stronger. Also work on more wordplay.. your verse was pretty bad but hella better than cripples...

v/ kill.

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