look im gonna have to give this to JAK

JAK: you came hard just alil hard to read...need to work on your structure....but everything else was good,....need to work on your personals and meta4s..veryone likes a good personal....so if you do that then you will become real good...also work on you punches...all in all 8/10

TREE: you was coo ez to read but to simple next time come alil harder ive seen beta from you..so just come harder..make it a lil mo komplex and betta vocab....you got everything else down tho...all in all7/10

thanks for battlin in elevated...

vote=JOAT

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