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tenken opener was startin off sick and then you used a miss cleo punch an killed it good wordplay though try a different line behind that four see shit and the closer wasnt there either had good wordplay again just no punch in it and threw the rest of the verse was real inconsitent to me you used another miss cleo punch lol but you did have good wordplay just try workin on makin your punchs hit harder and more personals

spul opener wasnt nothin stop with tha michael jackson punchs already use kobe bryant or somethin and the closer was decent coulda been better and threw the rest of the verse stayed some what conisistent decent punchs threw the verse again no punchs in your verse hit that hard but stayed bringin some kind of a punch so that gets my vote in this battle

vote spul

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