aight check it....

LostChild
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:4/10
Vocabulary:2/10
Creativity:3/10
Punches:5/10
Opener:2/10
Closer:no comment

Overall:22

Comment:
man...what were you thinkin in this one guy....to tell the truth your cshit was the weakest of all im tellin you...punches werent there( if any ) and your Vocab sux, take my advice and go back to the 1st grade and learn da basics

Favorite line: there wasnt one

CreaTivitie
Flow:5/10
Wordusage:6/10
Vocabulary:5/10
Creativity:6/10
Punches:5/10
Opener:4/10
Closer:6/10

Overall:37

Comment:
dogg go to elevated coz all these newbs arent nothin...i coulda had my lil sis kill this "lost child" but really though this was a blow out...

Favorite line: i really didnt like any of them but since you won ill give you one i thought was almost good...The closer...it was ur best line

v/ creaTivitie

be sure to return da favor with NO HATE...