ok it goes down like this, elmersglue did good,tek did better..
the punches were about tied.
structure: tek/ elmersglue that first line ruined your whole structure
flow tek/
best line of the battle:
Ill break this kid into so many pieces hell need more the Elmers *Glue*
He came at me tryin to be hard but he bite of more then he could *Chew*
throw more punches!!
v/tek

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