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Old 04-29-04, 09:09 PM   #7
Shadows edge
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damn to bad dirtboy had to put u up aginst me/
cause from the outher battles i seen you in i know that your shit will be weak
wtf this doesnt rhyme and is fucking horrible
the biggest weak part of you is your pounches/
there so weak i dont think anyone one can feel them/
no
dog cause now im a hurt you so bad youll need to be put back in your crib/
now this fool actuly thought he was the Elites frount line assassin/
no
the only way he got there is by bitin of somebody elses battles/
when actually this fool is like B-Rad from malibu's most wanted/
almost decent
tryin to rap but his flow is retared/
cause his mamma was a fuckin crack addict/
doesnt rhyme. sucks hard.
and now he's the jack ass so some one look at him/
what the hell is this doing here? it sucks hard anyway

Well this was a waste of time. Try rhyming and not sucking ass next time, is all I can say.

Yung your verse was disappointing, but easily way better than this turdpile.
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