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Old 04-29-04, 09:28 PM   #10
PoLiFicK
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nice drop both fellaz

discharge u had some tite lyrics and some punches and easy strucutre

bestline- cant believe that im batteling this same bitch toxic verbs//
this cats gonna get smoked like them cali herbs//

^^ nice start-

worsteline-none

good job overall verse gets a 9/10

toxic

nice drop ok verses and alright structure rhyming needz work sum shit u said neva rhymed

bestline-DISCHARGE known for 'exposing-lungs' when 'folding-bums' unless you do like people having a seizure and 'HOLD-YOUR-TONGUE'//
i'm the 'bomb' you'll get your style 'blown-to-crumbs' and call aurora AGENT SMITH cuz you couldnt handle 'THE CHOZEN1'//

^^ nice start

worsteline-answer my challenge? i see that you've 'gotten-bold' but all this text has got your career going nowhere like immigrant's 'WITOUT-THE-BOATS'//
your a slick rick 'witout-the-gold ' So i'll have you RUNNING FROM THE NET WITH YOUR HANDS UP like 'SOCCER-GOALS'//

boooo

overall yo vere gets a 8/10

winner-discharge
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