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Light Weight
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IP:
ok well Killa Bwoy i was feeling ur lines
Vocab and Structure:
Ok vocab pretty complex used lots of big words and shit like dat... also your vocab was killer compared 2 TripleN... structure was good aswell
Personals and Punchlines:
This would be ur strogest point in the battle i was feeling ur verses especially
'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../
Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../
I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../
that what got u my vote...
Flow and Rythmicness:
Your lines flowed exspecially well and the rythmicness of your ryhmes was good as well...
TripleN was really feeling ur lines so much
Vocab and Structure:
vocab was ok but Killa beat u on dis... u need to use more complex and big words... and structure was the same as killa's...
Punchlines and Personals:
You had a bit less they hit pretty strong but not strong enough to get my vote...
Flow and rythmicness:
ok ur lines flow was really good and same wit the rythmicness...
Over all:
ok my vote goes 2 Killa Bwoy cuz he had better punchlines and personals and they hit hadder also, he had some mad vocab...
Winner: Killa Bwoy
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