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Old 04-30-04, 01:30 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by TonySelf
so it was 10 lines one time? aight im gettin the hang of this shizznit!im not used to this crap plus im fuckin zooooooooted


these words originally posted by 'tony himself'.
shows he needs help- i fret this yougin will never learn on time.
its crime to not set this dreamer straight in line....
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first i pray to God you can just comprehend my elaboration.
ill collaborate RB nation, to the state of newb soul foundation.
its like freight train to a staion- essential to empower itself.
listen up mr. Tony S. Elf- lets start simple... water is ice when it melts.
catch my words so far? well mark the first check off.
starting where we left off. i might be too complex for yor brain to knowledge.
yor' lookin at these words, thinkin to urself " how'm i spose to make it to college"
im like kanye, 'cept im spittin through a fire-
my entire house flamed to ash in san diego- but nothing stops real writers.
im a liar- see theres yor' first lesson to be learned in this forum.
be prepared for fakes, catch 'em on mistake and record 'em.
this verse is straight boredum. but im slappin myself awake.
yor' publically viewed records at stake.
you couldnt elevate if you stepped on an escalator.
some body alert Ton's radar- this is like love between a boat and a sailor.
you'd go down with tha ship no question.
but you defeatin me? you even keying yor' verse - is what im testin.....