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Old 04-30-04, 01:56 AM   #13
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yo dope battle
very close call
so heres my breakdown

punches= tie> both had some tight punches that were interestin and creative
vocab= tie> i think both had some gud use of diction in there
structure/flow= this goes to tripleN to me b/c he had some better transitions between lines and the whole thing flowed a lil better than killahs
complexity= tripleN again b/c I like the way he set up his punches, and he had some koo play on words in there(lil john)
personals= again a tie, both had some koo burns

overall winner= barely b/c this was a very competitive battle but i go with tripple b/c i think he wanted it more 4 my reasons above

fav. line: "Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer
Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player"

hit my battles yall
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