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Old 04-30-04, 05:24 AM   #21
JPoll
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the breakdown

Lyrical

CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin',
6.5
Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen,
Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten',
7.5
Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight,
Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light,
6.5
You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates,
You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes,
8
He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv,
My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me.
7


carson

Lyrical MC.......

Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner
....chek his lyrics....
What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer!
7.5
11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it....
Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox
7
100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going...
Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing....
6.5
1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend....
The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend..
7
Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend...
Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again....
7

hmm well i don't know what to say besides i'm a little dissapointed with this but whatever...i like carson's flow...but he really didn't have ANYTHING half intelligent in his verse

breakdown on points
lyrical-35.5/50
carson-35/50

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