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Old 04-30-04, 10:18 AM   #10
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for abli:

flow:good job i don't see any problems here 7/10

volcab: pretty basic but there were some good spots 6/10

punches:mainly open disses and played topics like calling him gay damn that's been done since the old school breakdance and graffetti art days of hip hop but you did address him from line 1 to the end so you gets points for that 6/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for VC:

flow:not working i thought quite as good as abli some of the bars were kinda streched 6/10

volcab:good job here pretty much on par with abli 6/10

punches: played topics for the most part here with your verse too but yours seemed to be worded alot better and seemed to hit more direct and do some damage my fav line,"i'll shit on and bloody this mc like his dome was a tampon/" played idea but some new wording of it good job 8/10

overall:20/30

vote--close battle here but in the end i see VC on top
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