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Old 04-30-04, 11:04 AM   #11
plustwo
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aight dat bettle was good

breakdown...

gkillaz05: aight i thought this spit was dope...

i liked the opener.. dat was funny

best line: Wanna make a bet that he gun take a bite off my verse...
Im treatin this kat worse then Eminem did to fred durst...

worst line: non i liked dem all

the structure was good and u had some nice punches... overall mark 8/10

insane16...

aight i thought it was pretty good aswell

the opener wasn't very good (couldav bin better)

best line: dont u ever compare that pussy ja rule to me/
i spit-shyt-jit in ya eyes jus so u can see this game is real to me/

worst line:i got two words for u and this rap game- forget-it/
this pussy think he a vet but he jus dont-get-it/


overall i thought that it was good but couldav used better rhymes and you couldav made the structure a bit better... over all mark 7/10



vote= gkillaz05