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Old 04-30-04, 11:44 AM   #1
M&rk
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ya'll ever heard of wordplay, we need some votes from some vets u can respect wordplay,
u say this is my worse line:
Why u wanna step to this, u aint smart, there aint no more kings, so I gotta brighten u up like the president of bling bling.

u gotta know what wordplay is to respect it. im sayin he's king, and aint smart
so i gotta (brighten him up) get him smarter, like the president.(cuz there aint no more kings) of bling bling.( bling is bright)
damn i streched that verse some so it would be more obvious, thought i'd be havin people wit more than a few post and some knowlege votin on this.
u gotta respect a line with double wordplay in it damn.

he doesn't have an ounce of wordplay in his verse. he jus sayin shit like my fat lines ganna leave u like oprah in her prime. that shits easy to jus say radom shit like his scare face line or tom cruise.

guess it was my fault not to include, no dick riding votes in the rulez
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