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Old 04-30-04, 12:08 PM   #12
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i'm a break it down simple for this battle

flow
CJ got the flow cuz he kept his shit together with sum funny ass rhymes so i cud really get into his spit.
structure
really both y'all had aight structure but CJ gets it cuz he kept all his shit together the same length bar like a line or two
punches
jay u came stronger than i've seen u do but still CJ took it with hard punches that had killa connection.
creativity
CJ got this cuz he used gud wordplay and threw in sum nice personals with a few multis in there to. jay u had sum nice lines but u did use a couple of made up personals which never work
Opener & Closer
no offense jay but ure opener was a little weak and the closer wud have been aight wit a bit more thought and if the MK shit hadnt been done b4. CJ gud opener, that clearin the throat was funny and u ended sick.

OVERALL
My vote goes to CJ cuz he flat out dominated this battle and it really did show u who was the newbie and who was the veteran rapper.

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