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Old 04-30-04, 01:42 PM   #4
Real Thorough
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 314
From: Detroit, home of what we feel!
IP:

That battle is real, YOUNG I like you cuz, I'm saying WELCOME TO THE CREW!, but first check with the boss man.

Oh-k, YOUNG- first line/punch wasn't all that hot, you could have used a harder or a more complex meta. 6/10

You had no sense of vo"k"ab in there, or you didnt use enough meta's once again, and you didnt get personal enough 5/10

The scripture of the whole thing you did was well organized 9/10

Your overall is 20/30, all you really need to do is ELEVATE! that get you far here, dont let my battle record fool you!

KingSOLO-
Aight, Your first verse was "U right Jigga we on different levels, we aint ever gone meet, unless my royal ass slips up and falls a thousand feet//", almost knocked the hell out his whole bar that he came on you with that "I'm on a level that most rookie's would never reach
In the crew I'll be over you like Jay-z over Memphis Bleek". 10/10

The voKab. was on alright, you know you should have spelled out some things like that cudnt, but its all real though cuz you atleast had that ocapella in there. 7/10

your scriptured verses and you overall stance in the battle was held down tough, yo punches caught him left to right like a fight between RAY and ALI. 9/10 could of slammed him though
Overall vote 26/30, my vote stands clear HONEST, and it goes to KingSolo.
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