retired.
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IP:
It's like this, peep his profile, it claims that he the iiish,/
Well U in Jay'z lyrical doghouse, and that means you the bitch./
you definetely could have done better with that set up, but ok.
Finally took the step up dogg, so 4 yo sake, I hope you elevated,/
You rose fast, U can fall just as quick, another nigga I faded./
ok, not great again, punch doesnt live up to set up
Another wanna-b g, come back at me, talkin about what your gun do,/
Puttin' through a lyrical tannin' bed, findin' different ways to Son you./
awesome, best bar of the battle.
So you Jack Off All Trades, Ain't particular, damn youz a dirty man,/
I be clownin' you, winnin' and grinnin', U think I'm usin' a dirty hand./
first line better... good concept but you could have done more with it i think
Nah man, no cheatin' just skill, No woman, you beatin' for just thrill,/
No one 'gon remember U, U can scream your name till your voice gets shrill./
ok, ok
The name U use might leave niggaz confused, Falsely implyin' you got skills,/
Heard a Jack of All Trades is a Master of none, That's why rap won't pay Ur bills.
this is nice play on words.
NO FEEDING, you fed off all my shit and ate it as a meal, This CAPS twisted and sealed
You showed me nothing new "ELEVATED" but ur rap wasnt revealed
kinda stretched... not that great either
I Kid NOT, This kid cant STOP, embarassing himself he aint the real HIP-HOP
1 line bar? not great... just a useless multi
I'll depict ur lyrics stem by stem, making your peeps Da Branch you from the click
My RAP Ryhmes and it sticks the type of physical bond like when ur hand touches
dicks
yeah... too stretched and again kind of a weak punch. dont let multis get in the way of developing a punch
I'll splatter your brain matter, Lyrically stomp you so your whole face shatters.
again.. 1-line bar? better multi i guess...
My undestructible style, got you smerking a smile,
making you add another loss to your Rap Battles File.
could have done way better than that with the concept... gotta flip it cuz its played
Moving your mind frame with my Lyrical telekenesis, Destroying your Rap Thesis,
and putting more pushed pressure than your Nose when it sneezes.
ok.. kinda sounds like "Infinity" there... and the nose line is bleh
My mind just coached my lyrics to perfection, placing you where you directioned,
in the rap battles losing section, have any other lasts requests None too Mention!!!!
nice rhyme, could have used it for an actual punch though.
JoaT.. I was disappointed like enygma... heard you were good but you just didn't bring it. I'm not feeling that multi shit at all... you gotta bring actual punches if you want to win.
v/ CJ for that tanning bed line alone.
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