Give the boy a chance at winning this battle//
At least give him a line minimum he can handle//
Didn't really rhyme...wack punch...
Unlike my skills, something that you will never defeat//
You might as well try to defeat Mohammad Ali//
Blah...no rhyme again...
Before you battle me, cuz I ain’t no wanna be//
I am ones of the realist MC’s, one of the best//
Hmm....tried sum multi's...but they dont mean nething if they done help a punch...and they didnt help a punch...
Your like “Good Will” the way your giving things away for free, like this battle//
You could atleast show up next time you decide to rap battle//
finally its over...

Okay...You need to work on punches mainly....get punches first before working on anyhting else...work on using personals....just go to tutorials cause you need help in everything....especially rhyme scheme....simple as that....On a scale of 1 to 10 i'd give your verse a 1....cause nothing rhymed....no punches...just elevate man...

...yo I'can't be handled...respected world wide...i dont know who dis hoe is...
yo we could both disapeer...come back and see who remain to be noticed.../
Ok opener...not that great of a punch...
underestimating what you hardly saw...cuz i'm showin up like tits at mardi-gras...
kid just learnin to walk...but my punches can make you hardly crawl.../
Nice punch...good multi's...good bar...
accomp known to hit'em...commin at ya xp style not dis ms dos prompt system...
dissmiss em'...elevatin like david blaine...sky high i'm known to lift em.../
Not any real punch but ok multi's....ok metaphor too..
ya rhymes is "soar" that don't mean ya elevatin....
airplanes couldn't lift ya level higher than mine...i'm everest slangin..../
Nice nice nice...
me an you compared is like pizza wit out sauce...just half da flavor...
even if ya ass owned mead notebook company...you couldn't have half my paper.../
lol funny...
ya feel my rhymes...beakya from cannibus to those plastic nines....
spit a 4 minute keystyle...but i could killya in half da time.../
Niiice closer...

Now this is a decent verse....i know you didnt come hard cause u woulda straight up murdered him if u went at ur fullest potential....but u did whut u had to do....got an easy win....good punches...lman u can learn ish from that verse....also u had good multi's accomp....nice spit for not tryin....on a cale of 1 to 10 id give it a 7....

Vote - accomplishment

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