spul aight, make ya lines shorter an use metaphors n shit like that. Enhanses the rhyme...

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Tha Ghost! Far Rockaway,Queens n all far rock projex Repazent!

To the NYPD: You cant catch watchu cant see!! BITCHES!! HA HA outran u befo, n will do it again!!

parts a ma street free...maaaad threats n murda talk...

"watchu think goes bump in the night,
im either fuckin ya bitch or takin ya life..."

"i hate suckas that always be lyin,
get out tha game fo i stab u witta soderin iron"

take any a my lines ima fuck u up!!!!