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Old 04-30-04, 05:26 PM   #21
plustwo
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aight imma drop an honest vote...

accomplishment:

opener: damnnnnnnn i thought dat shit was tight.

best line:crew like "get em"...i aint gonna fight her...waiten for a main-course...not this appitizer...
this kid despises me...its cuz i'm young...yet so much wiser.../

worst line: none

finisher:i thought that could do with a bit of improvement:

all in all i thought your flow was pretty tight u rhymed well n had some good punches...

15/20



afterword:

opener: not bad but couldav bin better

best line:you use to ryhme clas-sic, but it got drastic so u, fill-da-void quik
u got yur ass whipped, so fuck yur last clique, now u ridin killah bwoy's dick

worst line:you kant fuckin see me u weiney im a distant solar-system
after this yur fam will be grievin, like theres a U.S. soldier-missin

finisher: i didnt really feel that 1 really

all in all your spit was pretty good but you couldav improved a little bit.

13/20


i thought this battle was pretty close but my man accomplishment had that one

\\// peace \\//