.:Grim Reaper:.
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IP:
aight imma drop an honest vote...
accomplishment:
opener: damnnnnnnn i thought dat shit was tight.
best line:crew like "get em"...i aint gonna fight her...waiten for a main-course...not this appitizer...
this kid despises me...its cuz i'm young...yet so much wiser.../
worst line: none
finisher:i thought that could do with a bit of improvement:
all in all i thought your flow was pretty tight u rhymed well n had some good punches...
15/20
afterword:
opener: not bad but couldav bin better
best line:you use to ryhme clas-sic, but it got drastic so u, fill-da-void quik
u got yur ass whipped, so fuck yur last clique, now u ridin killah bwoy's dick
worst line:you kant fuckin see me u weiney im a distant solar-system
after this yur fam will be grievin, like theres a U.S. soldier-missin
finisher: i didnt really feel that 1 really
all in all your spit was pretty good but you couldav improved a little bit.
13/20
i thought this battle was pretty close but my man accomplishment had that one
\\// peace \\//
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