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Old 04-30-04, 07:28 PM   #12
{D.N.A.}
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From: REPPIN VA HARD
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aight

To tell you the truth even if you show up it'll be classed as a no-show
Cuz you getting knocked out like you were Corrie Sanders against Vitali Klitshco
^try to throw personalz in ya verse it would help alot

Sorry if i hurt you made you cry or even made you frown
But that was a diss heres a pen and paper you wanna write one down?
^^nice flow but no dissez

But lets face it you're hopeless what the fuck are you supposed to do
When even your biggest dickriders won't vote for you?
^itz ok but elevate

Claimin' you're a killer it must be bad for your health
When you'd even have difficulties killin' yourself
^Thatz prolly ya best line

So at the end of it all its no poin wishing you good luck
Cuz if 1 person votes for you, you aint good, they just dumb as fuck
^aight closer
5/10

Your Hip-hop has proven to me to be your Weakness, And as God as my witness/
You ain't even got enough money To pay Santa to Come to your House On Chirstmas/
^better vocab and nice opener

This ain’t a battle, it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom//
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!//
^Nice hitz

Your messin with a big dogg, yous jus a little fool,//
In jail you get passed around like a porn mag does in middle school,//
^I did feel a lil hit

AuthenTiK got locked up and i know wut happen//
He was playing with them "young" kids like michael jackson//
^Keep up tha flow like the rest of it

AuthenTiK wouldn't be violent//
Even if he was a white girl trapped in a room with kobe bryant//
^again the flow and aight closer.
6/10

feel that the personalz wuz not there but killa came harder.

Vote True KILLA
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