Not even close.. burn had an actual verse.. other guy just had some whack couplets, with generic punches and elemntary rhymes. Try to work on wordplay, metas, etc.

Burn, you gotta work on fixing your structure and a little bit more originality, but that was a pretty nice drop for a newb. Props, and keep elevating.

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