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Old 04-30-04, 08:45 PM   #34
Rising Sun
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unknown ur flow is aiight...the idea is good....but no multies, wordplays, or punches. some metaphors though...pretty weak verse

heres spikys best line. his only multie. wack flow, sorry no offesne, but wack everything. not even a rhyme. peace. so it should be obvious
my rap was weak but yo raps began to leak when
u got to the top of yo peak/

best of the worst unknown
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