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Old 04-30-04, 08:52 PM   #9
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^ return tha favor

Tech.-Weak opener,it just was too simple and soft.
AN IT AINT TAKIN ME LONG TO POST THESE RHYMES/
CUZ IF I WAS I WOULD SHREAD YOU ACROSS DA COST OF EAST LINES/
AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/
THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/
MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/
FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/
SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/
SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/
IM REPPIN THA MOTHAFRRRUCKIN EAST SIDE/
IM BETTIN YOU'S A UNDERTHUGGIN BEAST RIGHT/
WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/
IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/
THE EFFECT OF MY POISIN FIRE WOULD BLIND YOU/
BUT DAT'S JUST MY SPARK,MY HOLLOWS BEHIND YOU/
^^If ya read this agin,you'd see,this is softer than a tittie.I don't see how that would diss your oppenent.These lines are "meh".They were complex,which is good,but just plain whack.
Weak closer.Same as problem as ur opener.


Born2 Spitt-Ok opener,nice shit bout DMX.
I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election//
Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection//
^^only these lines are whck.That erction shit has goten played out badly.But don't worry,the rest was better then anything tech had.

Overall-Kinda one sided.Born2spit had this thing easily.

Vote-Born2spit
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