ok tech rhymes
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ok u had good punches(example):MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/
FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ ok thats not great though keep working
you had bad bad bad punches (example)AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/
THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/
(heres anbother bad one): WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/
IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/
that made no sense
(heres another punch that made no sense):SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/
SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/
not good keep working 4/10
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born2spt
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bestline:Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save//
Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”//
this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple//
fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple//
my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected//
if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected//
hella good starter!!!
worst line:Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC//
Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."//
it was ok but not great
8/10
good job nice work blah blah blah
my vote goes to born2spit

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