http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^vote

Ideal-Really whack opener.But you were creative but not hard enough.Like this line
A million candles on your grave yet only seven I lighted......
^^creative,but how does it diss ur oppenent?It seems like it was filler setting up for ur next line.But if add fillers,at least make it try to diss the other guy.
Verse was far from Ideal.Nice flow though.


20 Grand-Nice simile and metaphor in ur opener.
your rhymes have no flow like a punk ass vanilla,
^^first off,comparing ur opponent to vannila ice is played out.And you didn't add ice to it,so it was obviously just there to rhyme with other line.
Flow was not like ur oppenent.But punches were way better.

Ur like an etcha-sketch cuz u get shaked and will fade away,
the only reason u try to rap is to follow me cuz i paved the way,
^^this was prob. ur best line
Too bad ur closer was not as good.

Overall-OK battle,for newbs.Ideal had the flow,but 20 had punches.But off course,Punches out weigh flow.

Vote-20