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Old 04-30-04, 10:08 PM   #25
sun jian
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From: wu dynasty
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killa

This is a 'game' but you dont get a 'lifeline',//
You done touched more 'balls' than 'Jordan' in his lifetime,//
Even when you be playin Blackjack you can't get a hit,//
Have sex wit ya girl and she like "That's the size of it?"//
Quickpunch ya life's messed up enough, but I'll make it alot more perplex//
The internets ya only love, when ya on e-bay.. bidding for-sex//
Its no lie u've been ripped like dead plasma//
Punch's will leave u short-on-breath like midget-on-asma//
Suck n all the oxygen leave u with less breath//
Quickkpunch shaking my hand ready to meet his death//
Click ya heelz three times kid, you seem lost like Dorothy//
Tell me, how's a grown man gonna be more puss' than a sorority?//
U cant face me alone, so ill put an end to this madness//
To beat me, youll need more aids then ya sexual status//
Look at this nigga thinking he hard//
When he really soft as a milkshake bringing all the boys to the yard//
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this one had the WU king buggin best creativity ive seen so far.

quickpunch

conjure up pictures like Picasso on acid
Swallow your whole rhyme book, digest it and pass-it
Only if you logged-on as punches ur punches would connect
Expecting you to be ill is like a dodo having intellect
Fuck u 2 times, like triple x porn i'm stripping this kid of his minimal respect
leave u mentally wrecked like poor sighted mechanics ur work isn’t up to spec
Dick-less Dyke, You Wont Score Until After you leave This World
Got A Muslim Fetish - So When He Dies, He Can Finally Be With A Girl
Hallow Bastard, I’m ur Master, Leaving ur Shell Splintered And Split
U Brought Disaster, But Didn’t Followed After Until I Entered Submit
T12U3 K1LlA is a dope topical head, he deserves a compliment
^ Juts like your whole verse am spitting a false statement
Ur a faggot, Like Gay man with woman, you just fail to function
My verses leave him more speechless than a mute in a boardroom discussion
If ur neo and ur the one to save the game I’d never listen to ur rap tapes
I'm giving u a firsthand view of RB's lyrical rhyme rapes
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for sensation to feel
Post ur rhymes next to JA’s and the truth of whack-ness will reflect
cause if u wrote ur punches on lego blocks, they still wouldn’t connect
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those were some of the best punches almost better than mine almost.

what i think

this was the best and closes battle ive seen you both had good punches and structre and everthing but i vote for killa because his verse had more creativity and it had me laughin.