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mike your opener was ummm on the gay side made you say yourself was gay an shit wtf??? closer was nicely worded good punch and personal nice shit anr threw the rest of the verse you stayed pretty consistent nice punchs and good personals and it flowed pretty well even with bars kinda stretched overall good drop like you wanted this one

method your opener was assed out lines way to far stretched and the punch didnt even connect the closer was like 4 lines wtf you posted like 4 to his 1 line come on now aan its all bunched up hard to read kindaliketypinlikethis << hard to read aint it
you need to work on your structure an line count

vote mike

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