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Old 04-30-04, 10:51 PM   #28
E Looch
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true killa your opener was pretty good nice wordplay in it an decent punch and the closer was creative to nice punch and the rest of the verse was kinda sic kit had its ups an downs though not real conisitent but soem hard punchs in it when there were punchs nice drop brah

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Its no lie u've been ripped like dead plasma//
Punch's will leave u short-on-breath like midget-on-asma//<< good wordplay sick shit

quickpunch your opener decent opener punch wasnt really that hard nice flow in it though first line was sick an the second wasnt much the closer was pretty sick nice wordplay in that shit first line wasnt nothin to me cause ja pretty ill and threw the rest of the verse was pretty consistent nice punchs and multies but lacked on wordplay to me but it was a tight verse

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fuck it i aint listin all of them

tight ass battle people are sleepin on it sick shit from both sides but quickpunch gets it for stayin more consitent killa you got some talent though nice spit real seriuos shit when it was connectin
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