good battle 2 both
the winner is born 2 spit b/c his verse was much more complex
the punches were clever and set up well, the flow was constant throughout and he used multies, and personals to seal the deal.
the only criticizm from me is maybe use more advanced vocab+
and san juan just keep it up, elevate and u are on yur way

peace

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