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Old 04-30-04, 11:52 PM   #11
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would you like a more complex vote hurr....

Discharge... nice structre all lines are uneven and more than 20 sylables thats horible
you had three bars... with mad played rhymes which you need to work on hardcore... and there is complexity with rhymin dress with arrest are you remidial

your yelling like a damsal in distress,your rhymes are more confusing then chinese chess//
i won,no contest stop with tha nonsence, you cant beat me nigga im the best//

^ Ok one there is no such thing as chinese chess its checkers...number two your new here how can you say your the best....

ok mc elmers glue...
He came wit much more complexity...instead of battlin shit like hope..dope...
his rhymes got multies and come harder like this line

Next to me man your flow is insignifficant, like you have a Napoleon Complexity.
it's just because as a MC I'm omnipotent, I see all your words before-hand so my mind protects me.
^^ Kinda stretched but i would have to say from bieng expierenced its not completly easy to rhyme words with complexity so his rhyme scheme is way better you catch my drift essay...
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