heres my breakdown

deleon:

flow:7/10
structure:5/10
punches:8/10
wordplay:7/10
multies:6/10
vocab:6/10
opener:9/10
closer:6/10

overall: 54/80

juss_blaze

flow:6/10
structure:7/10
punches:7/10
wordplay:6/10
multies:6/10
vocab:7/10
opener:7/10
closer: 6/10

overall: 52/80

good verses from both but i think deleon took this battle with better punches but he really needs to elevate on his structure its a verse not a story..put it in lines like juss blaze...i know what u talkin bout wit ya rhyme scheme juss blaze but when u use the same word twice and try to make them rhyme it doesnt work only because it's text if this was an audio it would be diff but in text it doesnt work and u did it too many times good verse

vote: deleon

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