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Old 05-01-04, 12:24 AM   #7
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My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"
nice wordplay on the first line... ok personal but not that original.
This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics
When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted"
i like the rhyme, punch is kinda basic
My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)
haha... nice.
Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door
He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore"
meh.. not as good
You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming
I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring
alright... time for a new punch... kinda stretched too



Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise
untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized
nice multi, punch lacking
Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness
And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness
this is not a well developed punch
So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too
Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You
aight, i like the flow on this one a lot
My words will Rap around ya neck Region
Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin
Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin.
not a huge fan of 3 line bars.. you kinda messed up your flow
Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ
Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Crampa
ok... not that well developed though
You will neva eva Sustain
I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame
blah on flow... blah on punch
Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain
ok i guess this was part of the other two lines... the last word there should be "obtain" not "retain."


Again... not sure what all the hype is about JoaT... you got a lot of mutlis and talk a big game in your verse, but your punches are just totally lacking. v/ triple N.
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