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Old 05-01-04, 03:22 AM   #8
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My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"


^^^ decent attempt...but flow was off due to extra syllables...almost like you forced this punch.. eh


My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)

^^ decent personal...coulda hit harder tho






So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too
Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You

^^^ dats hot


Rhyme jack
Flow Jack
Punches Jack


Vote: Jack...way more refined verse


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