Aight bar by bar breakdown......

This 2-on-1, it cud be 10-on-1, ure chances of winnin are still gonna be none
Me vs. Sun Jian & DeLeon, I’ve already won and my ass has only just begun
It was a good set up line but the punch didnt hit hard...
i’ll bring my crew in so we can toss ure asses back n forth like a Frisbee
u cud practice for years, u still wudnt have tha combined skillz of a newbie
haha pretty nice...
sun jian be talkin shit like he the fuckin reincarnated tiger of jing dong
brains gettin sapped cuz DeLeon been suckin to long on sun’s ding dong
its ok...
u two bein MC’s…that just wrong, comin at the king like u two-strong
can’t even be callin me a bitch cuz u two are the ones sharing a thong
blah...just a gay punch...
DeLeon think he gud talking bout he come from the mafia of the dirty south
Might as well strap his ass to his face cuz its just shit comin out of his mouth
Decent...but first line was a filler...
I cud stand and spit two verses givin both these bitches one a piece
Instead I’ll blast ya both leavin u holier than a church full of priests
nice...
Yo as soon as we collided the outcome of this battle was already decided
Like pittin the Clippers against the Lakers that shit gonna be one-sided
yeah...no real hard hittin punch...
u two gone be the easiest of victims cuz u stepped up saw me and froze
u blow worse than ure mamas, and both they asses is experienced ho’s
not that great...
shit, this battle only a handicap cuz I’m against a couple of retards
I feel sorry for both y’all families so I’m a send them both my regards
Ok...
I be forced to defend the rep of this site like I’m a mo’fuckin rap guard
Be real tho, it wasn’t hard so now I’m a send both u back 2 the scrap yard.
Decent closer...

Okay sustainment wasnt there....seemed like it went up and downt he whole way...u had a couple of hot punches but a lot of ok punches....i'd give ur verse a 6 out of 10....u didnt show creativity....jus elevate cuz i see a lot of potential in u.....

king solo and his crew the LD
the ld? lirically desparate as you can see.
Ok personal...
i can understand why you want to battle every newbie.
cowardice, but battlin me? you might as well scream "school me"
no real punch...
why are you even own this site?your intrest is basketball.
i cant really understand why this whack shit is ranking so tall.
no punch...not a great personal...
thats the way the cookie crumbles ill just have to eliminate.
i got about as much respect for youthat from heaven on ill ejaculate.
gay...
i have fighting talent enough to do lyrical surgery on you, my BRethen.
here comes the king, time to perplex your mind, better go grab the Excedrin.
blah...

Okay your verse was boring....and i mean boring....no good punches....the only good bar was ur opener.....that was ur only good personal....jus elevate on vocab punches personals and try usin multis once ur elevated....id give ur verse a 3 out of 10....and thats being nice....

I'ma rip out ya tounge BITCH,fa postin that dumb shit/
u finna get punished cuz u dont come sick,u neva shouldve done it/
good multi's...nice opener...
its like-all-ya-raps were written on ya "girl-wit-her-crabs"/
Cuz your a 'pussy whos itchin' to run from fights-wit-da-Mag.../
not that great...
I thought you were untouchable like elliot ness/
and I billy tha kid but im about to make ya famous/
no punch...
you a small time-Im big like T-Rex/
And Ld-you and that whole crew should be wearing Kotex/
stretched line...not that great of a punch...
typin gay lyrics like ‘I don’t care poppy’..don’t u DARE knock me/
I’ll slap that disc right in ur clit like fuckin AIR hockey!/
yeah but i think king solo is a guy so he dont have a clit...
Im going off on this BITCH king and i cant stop/
so im just goin ta pull tha trigger and watch his brains *pop*/
yeah yeah...wheres the good punches?....
kissin-mah-ass, this nigga play tha game like a sucka/
thinkin ya weak bars is potent, but ya aint shit but a busta/
no good punch...
HOLLOW, bitches on tha inside all muscle but no GUTs/
this katz lines irrelevant like a bitch at a booty contest wit all titties and no BUTT/
stretched but ok punch....
wit churchs askin fa money, they be BILLIN' ME WILD--
your mama called me right now said "STOP KILLIN MY CHILD"/
haha...nice...but 1st line had nothin to do wit the battle..FILLER...
i reflect this hater, he's like a pebble agaisnt my chest/
tha anti-christ bow down nigga-- its tha devil in tha flesh/
not that great of a closer...

Aight ur shit was long but didnt even have more than 3 good punches...most were filler....sum of ur set up lines could have made ur punch real good but u didnt go places wit ur punches so thats why ur verse didnt do well.....jus elevate on punches....u had sum ok multis throughout....on a scale of 1 to 10 id give ur verse a 5....

Vote - King Solo....he jus had better punches....and showed how he is better than them....he didnt have any elementary line and that proves skill...good verse king...keep elevatin guys....peace...

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