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Old 05-01-04, 01:37 PM   #13
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for code-187

flow:no not really it didn't even really rhyme not good here 3/10

volcab:basic arrangment here nothing special 5/10

punches:nothing really you tried to get personal using that age thing but it didn't seem to work to well best line,"for being the oldest in the leage,with the least amount of braincells" keep trying here 5/10

overall:13/30 really lackluster

breakdown for 2bad:

flow:alright alittle choppy in spots but easily better then code-187 6/10

volcabretty basic nothing special 5/10

punches:some alright lines nothing too strong best line,"ya rhymes are padded out more// than Britney's bra's" pretty much played topics but atleast you were throwing them 6/10

overall:17/30 pretty good verse work on the flow abit

vote--2bad takes this
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