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Old 05-01-04, 02:23 PM   #43
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Originally Posted by LaTiNKiTTeN

native,i can see u may be on a higher level then most of these kids,but that aint much of a compliment...in the first verse u aint had one punch that stood out,perhaps it was all personals..but a lot of those lines just seemed like fillers n they didnt seem hard hitting at all......the second verse? ur flow was wayyy off...i dunno how u won with that,i guess it depends on who u're up against...u did have a one of two punches that were ok,the channel ur thoughts one was good...but the nike jumpsuit? thats was weak as fuck...so was the epmd...i've seen another verse from u on this board that was a lil better...anyway

DO YOU KNOW WHAT punchline is
I mean honestly
can you give me one example of a good punchline
and it really doesnt have to be from you
but, I want you to show me an example of a punchline
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