This junior high crew, still doing lunch recess n nap time
… no wonder their hardest punch is just a flipped Dr. Seuss rhyme
not much of a punch... but decent structure....
Call this the next school slaying, but hey at least y’all got your fame
Kinda sad…
These kids, still playing superhero, but they got some goofy ass names
not good... poorly worded with no real punch
LI, call yourself The Elevator…. “that’s the only place they hear my song”
Call Kuniva the Battery Man, the way he say “it’s Li Ion (/I on)”
sloppily worded... not a bad concept if used properly
Check their biography title - Kuniva and Li: A Fairy Tale… of sorts
And now we on the topic… I’m about to make a long story short
not bad
Yo Kuniva…
This cat cop my punches and think he got a “freestyle”
Worst sig ever dog… even your crew don’t think your worthwhile
not good... shouldnt have used it
No wonder, when you got half the posts in the complaints forum
I’m blacklisted already, next someone get a restraining order for him…
not much a punch... I"m sure blacklisted punches are played... or should be
Who we kidding… this cat queerer than a bill worth five dollar
… and posting his verse in green so he can pretend he a man of color
bad.....
Come with Cochran and still can’t connive a (kuniva) win
… not when your album worth less than the wrapping it arriving in
poorly worded... but not bad... the set up was better than the punch however
You drop shit? Take laxatives till you sick, and still no bowel movement
Come on man…
Your father beat you with the ugly stick… and got improvement
not bad at all... its bars like this that you show some upside
Even worse, check his girl… wait LI hasn’t posted any pics
Man… these cats worse than a game of hoops at the special Olympics
played... not good
Try as they fucking will, they just can’t get their balls to drop
Defeat me? Better luck getting Niagara falls to stop…
again... not good.. not even a good concept
Cats such lightweights, picking up the mic leave their wrist bone cracked
Got throwback album… hand it out to fam and it gets thrown back
poorly worded.... played concept... just not good
Just got shown whack, won’t show they faces till eyebrows grown back
They skills a known lack, just can’t come hard… like they got a torn sack
too focused on trying to use multis... just not good
Bars so lightweight they curling them to elevate… and still failing
Wait.. let me get this straight, how you hard if my mic check got you wailing?
mic check punches need to be used better than this......
Sometimes it just hard to tell… which is the bride n which the groom?
These cats are way ahead of their time… cuz they can’t help but come too soon
not good... at all
And ayo…
Excuse me, ladies and gentlemen, its time to publicly announce
LI, your ass is worth dick… because its what’s on the inside that counts
not bad.. played though.....


Basically.... definately work on your wording... it needs alot of help. You also need to focus on keeping the level of punches... you fall off far too often

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